Welcome back bloggers
This week I have been learning how to make a big improvement on my free write and to put a lot of detail on my free write to.
I am proud of this work because last year I was not doing much detail but this year I am doing a lot of detail and it is way better than last year.
The part I found challenging was doing a certain words because you had to like 100 and above
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Kia ora Austin,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing with us. I love how you have explained why you are proud of your writing and I'm glad you can see that your writing has improved this year from adding more detail. This is awesome news! In your report, what other information can you tell the readers about rugby league?
I look forward to seeing more of your fantastic work.
Mrs Taylor :)
thank you for looking at my blog
Deleterugby league is all around the world it is much better then rugby because you get 5 tackles and you can not strip but in rugby you can get how many tackles you want and you can strip.
what one do you think you will want to play if would want to?